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Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:08 pm
by LukeJavan8
Unless the participants are arrested.

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:46 pm
by saparris
They daren't arrest me, Austral Fontmeister and Prince of the Dark Subjunctive!

Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:51 pm
by LukeJavan8
Nay, but you may get brought in for verbal
lambashing and have your keyboarding fingers slapped.

Prince of the Dark Subjunctive, and Marquis of the
Modal Chase!

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:08 pm
by Slava
(That's all folks. Enjoyed it)
Though I didn't participate, I enjoyed watching it come together. My only quibble is over the "poetic license" in the use of the last word in line 5, but I'm fussy that way. I hope you do it again.

Have you looked into the Haiku section? Perhaps you could play with that, too.

http://www.alphadictionary.com/fun/haiku.html

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:31 pm
by saparris
Haiku Responses

(1)
It was done quickly
Conversational English
Was not frowned upon

(2)
Poetic license
Might have been avoided if
You had offered "stay"

(2)
Plans for another
Are bubbling in my noggin
Hope you will join in

Posted: Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:02 pm
by LukeJavan8
Nice haiku. Constructive criticism appreciated.
(haikus ?)