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Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 8:12 pm
by gailr
Doppelgänger: A Poem of Sin and Synonyms

I want to be forever good—until I want what’s bad
I try to banish sinful thoughts, till virtue drives me mad
It’s like an evil twin emerges with no decency
A fiend that issues from the depths of my psychology

I’ve tried to vanquish this dark side with therapy and prayer
But neither Freud nor God can best that lawless soul in there
The animus appeared at first the day that I was born
Like Eden's primal serpent, or a rose's early thorn

Sometimes that dagger's needed to protect the tender heart
Of fragile things. For me, it only tears the soul apart.
From childhood's lies and tantrums, I progressed to lust and greed
Giving in to every longing at a death-defying speed

As the immortal Shakespeare wrote: To thine own self be true
My id keeps being truer than my ego wants it to
That inner beast persists in mocking all my solemn vows
To urge sardonic barbeques of all my sacred cows

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Mon Sep 23, 2013 10:12 pm
by saparris
Doppelgänger: A Poem of Sin and Synonyms

I want to be forever good—until I want what’s bad
I try to banish sinful thoughts, till virtue drives me mad
It’s like an evil twin emerges with no decency
A fiend that issues from the depths of my psychology

I’ve tried to vanquish this dark side with therapy and prayer
But neither Freud nor God can best that lawless soul in there
The animus appeared at first the day that I was born
Like Eden's primal serpent, or a rose's early thorn

Sometimes that dagger's needed to protect the tender heart
Of fragile things. For me, it only tears the soul apart.
From childhood's lies and tantrums, I progressed to lust and greed
Giving in to every longing at a death-defying speed

As the immortal Shakespeare wrote: To thine own self be true
My id keeps being truer than my ego wants it to
That inner beast persists in mocking all my solemn vows
To urge sardonic barbeques of all my sacred cows

I wish there were some holy writ to make me change my way

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 9:20 am
by Audiendus
Doppelgänger: A Poem of Sin and Synonyms

I want to be forever good—until I want what’s bad
I try to banish sinful thoughts, till virtue drives me mad
It’s like an evil twin emerges with no decency
A fiend that issues from the depths of my psychology

I’ve tried to vanquish this dark side with therapy and prayer
But neither Freud nor God can best that lawless soul in there
The animus appeared at first the day that I was born
Like Eden's primal serpent, or a rose's early thorn

Sometimes that dagger's needed to protect the tender heart
Of fragile things. For me, it only tears the soul apart.
From childhood's lies and tantrums, I progressed to lust and greed
Giving in to every longing at a death-defying speed

As the immortal Shakespeare wrote: To thine own self be true
My id keeps being truer than my ego wants it to
That inner beast persists in mocking all my solemn vows
To urge sardonic barbeques of all my sacred cows

I wish there were some holy writ to make me change my way
Some means to stop my blasphemy when I attempt to pray

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 12:14 pm
by saparris
Doppelgänger: A Poem of Sin and Synonyms

I want to be forever good—until I want what’s bad
I try to banish sinful thoughts, till virtue drives me mad
It’s like an evil twin emerges with no decency
A fiend that issues from the depths of my psychology

I’ve tried to vanquish this dark side with therapy and prayer
But neither Freud nor God can best that lawless soul in there
The animus appeared at first the day that I was born
Like Eden's primal serpent, or a rose's early thorn

Sometimes that dagger's needed to protect the tender heart
Of fragile things. For me, it only tears the soul apart.
From childhood's lies and tantrums, I progressed to lust and greed
Giving in to every longing at a death-defying speed

As the immortal Shakespeare wrote: To thine own self be true
My id keeps being truer than my ego wants it to
That inner beast persists in mocking all my solemn vows
To urge sardonic barbeques of all my sacred cows

I wish there were some holy writ to make me change my way
Some means to stop my blasphemy when I attempt to pray
Until there is, I'll try to balance shades of good and evil

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 9:02 pm
by Audiendus
Doppelgänger: A Poem of Sin and Synonyms

I want to be forever good—until I want what’s bad
I try to banish sinful thoughts, till virtue drives me mad
It’s like an evil twin emerges with no decency
A fiend that issues from the depths of my psychology

I’ve tried to vanquish this dark side with therapy and prayer
But neither Freud nor God can best that lawless soul in there
The animus appeared at first the day that I was born
Like Eden's primal serpent, or a rose's early thorn

Sometimes that dagger's needed to protect the tender heart
Of fragile things. For me, it only tears the soul apart.
From childhood's lies and tantrums, I progressed to lust and greed
Giving in to every longing at a death-defying speed

As the immortal Shakespeare wrote: To thine own self be true
My id keeps being truer than my ego wants it to
That inner beast persists in mocking all my solemn vows
To urge sardonic barbeques of all my sacred cows

I wish there were some holy writ to make me change my way
Some means to stop my blasphemy when I attempt to pray
Until there is, I'll try to balance shades of good and evil
And hope my key to paradise is not beyond retrieval.

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 9:45 pm
by saparris
A good (respectable) effort (attempt) by all (everyone)!

saparris

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Sep 24, 2013 11:00 pm
by Slava
Thank you all. This was, to me at least, a formidable challenge, and well met by the authors. Kudos to all. I expect I speak for most of us when I say I look forward to XVIII. Now, where is that emoticon for "bated breath?"

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Wed Sep 25, 2013 4:54 pm
by Perry Lassiter
Best one by far!

Re: Group Poem XVII

Posted: Tue Oct 15, 2013 11:32 am
by LukeJavan8
A good (respectable) effort (attempt) by all (everyone)!

saparris


Far more than respectable. Excellent. I watched it forming
and am in awe of "youse guys". Bravo.