A picture caption from Newsweek of Jan.28:
Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks, for the moment
This seems to be mixing tenses, in a way. The meaning is plain enough, but this kind of careless writing seems a slippery slope.
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I don't know if the tenses are mixed, but I would have written "so far" instead of for the moment. Actually, better yet:
"So far, Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks."
"So far, Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks."
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I don't know, Perry.
To me, "so far" implies a continuous action from some starting point in the past up to the present, which stands a chance of continuing, while "for the moment" implies an action which may not have been continuous but rather may only have recently begun, and which has an uncertain chance continuing.
Since the Sadr loyalists did not originally obey the call for a halt to attacks, and some still are not, I think that, for the moment, there is doubt they will continue to obey the call.
To me, "so far" implies a continuous action from some starting point in the past up to the present, which stands a chance of continuing, while "for the moment" implies an action which may not have been continuous but rather may only have recently begun, and which has an uncertain chance continuing.
Since the Sadr loyalists did not originally obey the call for a halt to attacks, and some still are not, I think that, for the moment, there is doubt they will continue to obey the call.
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Re: Your opinion . . . ?
brogine wrote:Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks, for the moment
I don't see mixed tenses either but sloppy slopery, yes, in that as constructed it can almost mean (but for a measly comma*) either that the loyalists have refrained for now but may resume in spite of his call, or that 'he' has called only for a momentary halt (or even both).
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Re: Your opinion . . . ?
brogine wrote:A picture caption from Newsweek of Jan.28:
Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks, for the moment
This seems to be mixing tenses, in a way. The meaning is plain enough, but this kind of careless writing seems a slippery slope.
Hi, Brogine
For there to be mixed tenses, the sentence would require two finite verbs. This sentence has but one finite verb and thus tense: the present perfect 'have obeyed.'
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Note, however, the posts above yours date from 2008.
Many here do go way back, way back.
Lots just died in the '05 - '06 time period.
Obviously Saparris has not found you here yet.
Many here do go way back, way back.
Lots just died in the '05 - '06 time period.
Obviously Saparris has not found you here yet.
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Sadr loyalists have largely obeyed his call to halt attacks, for the moment.
Right you are, Enigma. You can't mix tenses when there is one tense.
"Most Sadr loyalists have obeyed...." would eliminate the poorly placed "largely," which would improve the clarity.
(Let's get some fresh air in the grammar threads, Enigma. glad you're here.)
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I hadn't noticed the time the threads were made. Maybe grammar has become obsolete. Is there a new way to communicate perhaps? Maybe I should start a thread about txt language.
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I'll refain from using it for your sake, Luke. You cannot blame me for the odd slip-up here and there though!
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