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Postby LukeJavan8 » Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:08 pm

Unless the participants are arrested.
-----please, draw me a sheep-----
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Postby saparris » Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:46 pm

They daren't arrest me, Austral Fontmeister and Prince of the Dark Subjunctive!
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Postby LukeJavan8 » Mon Feb 22, 2010 2:51 pm

Nay, but you may get brought in for verbal
lambashing and have your keyboarding fingers slapped.

Prince of the Dark Subjunctive, and Marquis of the
Modal Chase!
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Postby Slava » Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:08 pm

saparris wrote:(That's all folks. Enjoyed it)
Though I didn't participate, I enjoyed watching it come together. My only quibble is over the "poetic license" in the use of the last word in line 5, but I'm fussy that way. I hope you do it again.

Have you looked into the Haiku section? Perhaps you could play with that, too.

http://www.alphadictionary.com/fun/haiku.html
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Postby saparris » Wed Feb 24, 2010 1:31 pm

Haiku Responses

(1)
It was done quickly
Conversational English
Was not frowned upon

(2)
Poetic license
Might have been avoided if
You had offered "stay"

(2)
Plans for another
Are bubbling in my noggin
Hope you will join in
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Postby LukeJavan8 » Wed Feb 24, 2010 2:02 pm

Nice haiku. Constructive criticism appreciated.
(haikus ?)
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