Group Poem XII

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saparris
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Postby saparris » Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:03 pm

OK by me.
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Postby Slava » Tue Apr 10, 2012 7:28 pm

saparris wrote:OK by me.
That makes 2 for 2 in agreement for the publication attempt. Should we add commas and periods, or go with it as it stands?

I'm double-checking with Dr. Goodword, too. To make sure there aren't copyright issues. It is his site, after all.
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Postby Audiendus » Tue Apr 10, 2012 8:40 pm

Slava wrote:Should we add commas and periods, or go with it as it stands?

I think we should add some punctuation at the ends of lines. My personal preferences for each line would be as follows (P=period, C=comma, S=semicolon, N=nothing):

SPCP CPNP NPNP NPSP NCNP CP

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Postby saparris » Wed Apr 11, 2012 10:23 am

I'm OK with A's suggestion.
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Postby LukeJavan8 » Sat Apr 28, 2012 11:26 am

Can I make a copy of it?
I promised to follow and forgot: so sorry.
But I really like it, very well done.
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Postby Audiendus » Sat Apr 28, 2012 7:25 pm

LukeJavan8 wrote:Can I make a copy of it?

Certainly. I am grateful to you for originating this whole series of Group Poems two years ago! It all arose out of a discussion about Milton, just before I joined the Agora:

http://www.alphadictionary.com/bb/viewt ... 4899#24899

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Postby LukeJavan8 » Sat Apr 28, 2012 8:00 pm

Lordy,lordy, I totally forgot that long drawn-out
conversation. What an effort it was to get things
going. Thanks much. I love your poem: really pokes
at the politicals, and I love to do that.
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